nice tone but obviously crude and left a lot to be desired. Your color choices were also a bit off imo, don't be afraid to use darker values. Nothing wrong with a crude style but here it distracts from the narrative. It reminds me of Vewn, I would check out their stuff if you haven't for some guidance on how to refine this. But it's still really cool, and I loved that intro scene. Keep it up champ :^]